Hi, how is my singing? ( positive and negative comemnts, they all help :D)?

Question

ok, i dont take singing lessons, i just sing and act stupid... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5dXFpWCrJ... its both me, i put them together, the timing is sooo off, and i ***** fix it, and my voice cracked when i got high cuz i accidently ran outa breathe....hehe

this song is a song ive heard in a dream, i liked it, its interesting, and super weird, but w/e, tell me whatcha think!!

Answer 1

dammit it couldnt work for me it said The URL contained a malformed video ID.  

Answer 2

link doesnt work

Answer 3

ITS GOOD NEED MORE PRACTICE ON IT