Hi is it ok if in your compare contrast essay .....?

Question

one paragraph is very very big like(4 paragraphs put together) and the other paragraph is only 1 paragraph. so its a 1:4 ratio.

is that ok ?

my teacher does not want a 5 paragraph essay so im trying to make it a 4 paragraph essay that's why.

question is how do the characters become themselves.

this is the structure of my essay

1. intro

2. differences of Janie and differences of Milkman

3. similarities of Janie and Milkman

4. conclusion

thanks!!

Answer 1

try to make number 2 2 separate paragraphs and then add a paragraph between 3 and 4 to talk about how Janie and the milkman needed to be the way that they were to help with the story

Answer 2

first, why does your teacher want a 4 paragraph essay?  you're just making the second paragraph longer.

second, I think thats the only way you can set it up.