Hi please rate my zombie deck?

Question

The Creator Incarnate

The Creator

Witch's Apprentice

Mask of Darkness

Soul-Absorbing Bone Tower

Sangan

Return Zombie

Mystic Tomato

Reborn Zombie

Regenerating Mummy

Vampire Lady

Patrician of Darkness

Vampire Lord

Shadow Ghoul

Ryu Kokki x 2

Vampire Genesis

Zombie Tiger

Pyramid Turtle x 3

Royal Keeper

Wandering Mummy

Poison Mummy

Decayed Commander

Mystic Plasma Zone

Pot of Avarice

Mystical Space Tyhoon

Tribute to the Doomed

Call of the Mummy

Mage Power

Malevolent Nuzzler

Lightning Vortex

Monster Reborn

Tutan Mask

Success Probability 0%

Rising Energy

The Grave of Enkindling

Cursed Seal of the Forbidden Spell

Zoma the Spirit

Answer 1

1/10 - In all honesty, your deck is full of random cards that don't (always) go together.

Field spell cards are normally terrible, and MPZ is just that.  Tribute to the Doomed is beaten by better cards like Smashing Ground, and Fissure.  You'd be better served by staple traps like, Mirror Force and Torrential Tribute, Solemn Judgement or Dark Bribe.

The average ratio for a deck is 20 Monsters, 13 Spells, and 7 Traps (20:13:7).  Your deck is 25:9:6 - your deck is too unbalenced.  Where are your good recursion cards (such as Book of Life, Il Blood, and Zombie Master)?  Where is Heavy Storm, even?  If you need any help fixing it, I can help you out.