Hmmm...This may be some of my most meaningful work so far...?

Question

Earlier today I posted the chorus to the song that I had written last night, but after reading it over a few more times, I decided to erase everything but the chorus. It's not completely finished yet but I want your opinion on how it is so far..

Chorus :

What defines a true poet?

His Rhythm? His Flow?

Rappin' bout something other than his hoe?

h**l no, poetry is deeper than that

And these mainstream cats need to realize that

Until then step back and let the underground rule rap

Verse one (not finished) :

Open up a dictionary, look up poetry

First picture you see is MC GT, yo that's me

A true poet in every sense of the word

All my fans like d**n he deserves an award

Every morning I pray, thank god for another day

And I here him say ignore the hataz and follow your dreams

Reach for the stars, if you fall don't give up just continue to stand tall

I like it alot so far, what is your opinion on it? Rate it. Also keep in mind I still have to finish verse one, as well as write to more verses so I'm far from finished.

Answer 1

It was really good until the last two lines...you kinda lost your flow but other than that it was great.  Your lyrics were great and your flow was great but in those last two lines your flow lost it.  Work that out and you're onto to something.

Very, very good.  I liked the message, it was tight.

Peace & Love  :)

Answer 2

YOU R A GOOD RAPP3R COMPAR3D TO NAS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 3

It iiright I'll say 6.5/10 right now. Work on it some more but I feel what your talking about.

This can be the perfect rap with the time and skill and I see you have skill so work on it some more and it may be 10/10. Keep up the good work.