Honest Review of My Poem ?

Question

Awoke one morn

To amber eyes

Through window glass

The purple skies

Whispered of overreaching night

Though day it was by time, not light

Trace the footprints

In white sand

The darkness bright

Throughout the land

A murmuring voice, thus let it be

In tones of glossed mahogany

Brick by brick

And stone by stone

'Til together we

Are all alone

Wandering 'neath a lidless gaze

Through timeless dark and lightless days

This is one of my more abstract poems

Criticism welcome, but constructive criticism please

Answer 1

Perhaps:- A new day dawning, tho' not yet light.

In tones of glossed mahogany- Lovely.

I do not know why I like this but I do. Perhaps because it is abstract.

Answer 2

That's actually pretty good... It has nice imagery.

Answer 3

I honestly can't express how much I love this poem.  It is honestly, simply beautiful.  I really like the "tones of glossed mahogany".  It's writers like you that make me realize I could use some improvment!  :)