Honest opinion on lyrics?

Question

i needed to vent out some things and wrote this song

it was all written in a course of like 3 hours so don't expect like shakespeare or anything..

and please don't steal it.

here goes.

every moment of you and me

left behind the memories

my picture in your mind won’t last forever

you told me that you won’t forget

but I’m afraid that I might let

the thought of you tonight

slip through the spaces in my mind

you seemed like any other

and time didn’t want us together

but luck always seems to pass me by

when never lasts forever

forget me in the morning

and we could act like perfect strangers

just try your best to let go

and dont look back

I wish that I was faking

the love that you were taking

the hours of sleep lost thinking of you

it was a lie when I said goodbye

because you’ve really never left my side

you said it might be over

but never let the moment go

you seemed like any other

and time didn’t want us together

but luck always seems to pass me by

when never lasts forever

forget me in the morning

and we could act like perfect strangers

please try your best to let go

and never look back

forgive me for this song

but present becomes the past

the summer seemed so long

and I seemed so lost

we could have been perfect

and you deserve better

we never had the chance

and now its time to give up

when never lasts forever

forget me in the morning

and we could act like perfect strangers

please try your best to let go

and never look back

©2008 Camille Hilker

Answer 1

That's awesome!