Honest opinions about this poem please;?

Question

something red glistening down,

is watching the tree.

for the weeks pass by,

and time is frozen still.

as the songbird speaks,

the wind blows a single leaf

past a plastic bag and sighs.

the beauty of life.

Answer 1

I like it I really mean it nice job

Answer 2

its ok but you said to be honest so

It sucks sorry

Answer 3

I think it's too vague. And I know some poems are supposed to be vague, but that's usually to make you interpret it in your own way, and I'm not getting anything out of this poem.

Answer 4

*heavenly noises appear*

Answer 5

idk, rhyming poems sound better though.

Answer 6

i think it would sound better in rhyme or put into sections of two lines each.

such as:

something red glistens above

studying a tree

is it a dove?

the weeks pass by

time stands still

the songbird speaks

a lingering trill

the wind blows by a single leaf

a plastic bag now caught on the tree

etc

Answer 7

I like :O)

Answer 8

awww its really good. i like its link with nature. xo