Honest opinions needed?

Question

http://i248.photobucket.com/albums/gg191/hellooookitty/macys.jpg

I was asked to make a flyer for my job to hand to customer plz give me your honest opinions on how it looks

thanks

Answer 1

its nice and cool I love it!

Answer 2

Looks good. Make the title bigger please and fade the star a bit. Make it look more like the background, it makes the text easier to read. Since it's a department store like that you could look into some kind of a border perhaps. I like the font and typography is everything. Spacing looks good as well. just make sure the font is large enough to read because of the curvy style it has. Constructive criticism. Looks great.

Answer 3

i like it=]

looks good.

Answer 4

The black doesn't show up very well over the Macy's logo, and it looks like you just stretched out a Macy's jpeg file which makes it look kinda blurry. You may want to find a higher quality or larger Macy's image to use as the background instead, or maybe just put the logo at the very top and make it look simple yet elegant.

Answer 5

Red is a dominant colour and therefore it's more prominent than the words and obscures them

"Come join us at Macy's with Friends and Family"  need to be more prominent so have that in red. Then make sure the words on your list appear *between* the star points, not have the star overlaying them

Or make a circle of smaller stars and put the words inside the circle.

There's lots you can do but at the moment that star obscures the information your customer needs and your client would want you to make dominant.

Good try though :-)