Honest opinions on a poem?

Question

don't just tell me its bad... i already know that... just tell me what you think

We don't need anyone

We just need each other

Like the moon and the sun

Need one another

Lets run away

We'll be together, forever

Maybe not today

But someday together

No one to say no

No one wont let us go

No one can say so

No one can say no

Answer 1

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Answer 2

i love this but ive read it complete you are only 13 wow i was never this good lol  

Answer 3

i honestly like it!!!   :)

Answer 4

Cliche... a little too cliche. You need to rub a bit of yourself into it. You know, it's a good idea, but it's been done one too many times. Maybe some better wording and descriptive terms could even jazz it up a bit.

Just some advice from a fellow poet (:

Answer 5

I love it! I was hoping it'd be longer....it was going so good...

EDIT: HEY! I'm 13 and I've writen quite a few poems and long ones too. I also wrote some songs! ^_^

Answer 6

we need to escape! and i would go anywhere! if you just lead the way, escape to a place where we'll be together, together everyday! we need to escape...

Answer 7

It's not that it's bad, it's just that has been said a thousand times in pretty much the same way.

Ask yourself, how much effort do I want to put into a poem to have it sound uniquely my own? You can do this if you want. With the effort you can say what is in your heart in a way that sounds like it is your own unique way of expressing yourself.