How's my Marik Deck?

Question

well, of course it's not gonna be tournament legal, this deck is just for fun. what do you think?

Monsters: 20

3x Drillago

3x Newdoria

3x Makyura the Destructor

2x Melchid the Four-Face Beast

2x Legendary Fiend

2x Dark Jeroid

Lord Poison

Masked Beast Des Guardius

The Winged Dragon of Ra

Lava Golem

Helpoemer

Spells: 11

2x The Mask of Remnants

2x Mystical Space Typhoon

Monster Reborn

Pot of Greed

Magical Stone Excavation

Black Pendant

Card of Sanctity

Premature Burial

Heavy Storm

Traps: 9

2x Metal Reflect Slime

2x Nightmare Wheel

2x Sakuretsu Armor

Mirror Force

Torrential Tribute

Ring of Destruction

rate 1-10 and lemme know any other comments. don't tell me to follow the banlist with it, cause it's not possible to make a marik deck without some of the banned cards. it's supposed to be a marik deck with a few other favorites added (ring of destruction mostly)

Answer 1

What the dude above said

You do know their is an awesome nightmare wheel combo but i forgot what it was LOL

I thought Bakura had Ra and Marik just stole it......Or was it that Marik has all the gods and then somehow Yugi got them from him...

Answer 2

Love it! It has nothing to do with nothing (apart from marik) but if your coppieng marik it's perfect now all you need is awful hair, and the shadow realm (LOL).