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How's my simple historical poem?

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Pages turned stone;

Tablets of history;

Cleopatra's mysteries,

Terrible Ivan's fury.

Fallen by destruction;

Limestone weathers away;

Words of ancients lose its echo,

Among the cracks and crevices:

Hidden jaundices.

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  1. I like it!  You're a good writer. Keep it up!


  2. I like it, but I don't know what jaundicees are.

  3. Very well written

    I like the simplicity and the flow.

    keep up the good work

  4. That's really good!

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