How's this for a love poem? Any comments?

Question

Love

As faithfully as the sight of

stars and moonlight,

I have seen myself

reflected in your eyes,

surrounded by the love behind them;

held precious in the worlds in your heart.

A universe displayed in one look

one touch, a feeling unmatched;

knowing the eternal breathes

life into me when you are near.

For all time, it will ever be

an unspoken reality;

kindred souls

to last through eternity.

Answer 1

thats like 10/10

Answer 2

it is so beautiful. its so touching. when i read the first two lines, i was like wow. my favorite lines are the few lines.

Answer 3

aww...

i like it!

Answer 4

This is a great love poem. I love the whole poem but the last four lines are my favorite, they're beautiful.

Answer 5

beautiful

Answer 6

"Hi!",

WOW, that was a splendid love poem.

WELL DONE!

Cheers: )

Answer 7

Love:

This is a beautiful poem

I like how it talks about the stars

and moonlight.

The moonlight can be romantic for

a couple to spend to together

The stars would be dancing up in

the sky.

I would think of this like romance

for the reasons I said.

Answer 8

I like it.

Answer 9

It's real good for a love poem.  If you give it to someone I'll bet

they will blush for a week.

Answer 10

OMG that is so cute! anyone you tell that to will be like zapped under a love spell. my only comment is that the line "held precious in the worlds in your heart" is kind of awkward because its longer than the rest. That would make a really sweet song and each little part could be a verse and the first four lines could be the chorus. That is soooo sweet!

Answer 11

This is quite lovely and inspiring.  The image of being reflected in your lover's eyes "surrounded by the love behind them" is very beautiful.  I also love the lines "knowing the eternal breathes...    life into me when you are near".  They are the epitome of words of love.  Thank you.