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How's this poem i just finished writing

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I'll do everything for you and that's all true, if i lied to you it'll be the day that my heart turns blue

i know i can but the will of a man is to take what's in hand and never be sad again

when i had you it was the moment of life, but to lose what was gained was the thing that paid the price

i don't really know what money is for

the things you loved are the things we couldn't afford

we were good together and that was a fact

the things that we had was something no one could match

but time has grabbed us and pulled us away, it's sad to know the one i love was real until this day

you left me now my heart stands sore, but you is what my heart will always have room for

until that day I'll wait for you, in my room remember the things we use to do

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  1. really good! sensitive and sweet. keep it going!

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