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How about the Lucifer train a coming?

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In honor of the "Lucifer' pens this morning, I penned this fast since I heard the train a coming! lol

The Midnight Train to ???

I hear the train a coming

looks like a man in red is driving

and his minions are a stoking.

The smokestacks are a smoking

and kingdom come is a running

(regular bookings are a dropping!)

The train is slowing now, a braking

and the iron wheels are screeching.

A special platform been a building

with the latest villains a waiting!

Now the train begins its roaring

and the smokestack is a smoking

but he left a list with badges a waiting

of the future entrants building…

Now is your badge a waiting?

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  1. Wow...where am I going and why am I in this handbasket? Or train, for that matter.


  2. Wow this is a really cool poem and as always it's a hit ..

  3. Now, I love trains...but this one is scary!

  4. Drat! Missed the train again!

  5. I guess this isn't the midnight train to Georgia, is it?

  6. We are all going the other way!  A fun poem!

  7. hehe...I like trains...

  8. lol..emm..no.

    No it is not.

  9. No I'm a-taking the "Slow, Slow Train comin', comin' round the bend, comin'" B Dylan

    Well as the song goes "The Devil went down to Georgia". I always wondered how he got there.  

    I kept wanting to put a-hyphen in the words at the end of the lines (no pun intended) is there a "rule" for hyphen placement in that setting?

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