How about this Childrens Poem? Billy's Firetruck?

Question

BILLY'S FIRETRUCK

Outside the window Billy gave a quick look

He saw a big red firetruck just like the one in his book

"Mommy, Mommy where did it go

That big red firetruck, I do want to know"

My Mommy sat down next to me and said

"Now Billy that firetruck so big and red"

"Has gone to help people who need it today

The fireman must go there without a delay".

"But how do the fireman know where to go?"

Ask Billy to Mommy because she would surely know

Mommy said "At the place where the fireman sleep and work

There's a big bell that rings and wakes the fireman with a jerk".

"Then their radio tells the fireman where they must go

So they hop on their trucks and sirens they blow."

Billy thinks to himself someday I will be

Just like the brave fireman. That will be me!

Answer 1

wow, that was great!

i love it.

:D :D

Answer 2

And how would it make you feel - that one day - one of your poems would direct a child in a lifelong career?  Mighty powerful - the word is. ♥

Answer 3

You're on a roll today, dear!

One thing....Make "fireman" fireMEN.

Answer 4

Your gonna have a Novel by the time your done!!

That's a good thing !! Keep it up your doing great!!!

Answer 5

This would be cute in a children's poetry book about occupations.

Answer 6

What a great poem! Write some more.