How about this poem????

Question

I wake up in the morning

After feeling a pleasant breeze

I wake up so excited

To play with my man

As I look around the room

I realize that my bed is empty

And all I have left of you

Are memories of our love

I was feeling a little emo, so I wrote this. I'm 14, so I'm sorry if it isn't that good. Any comments welcome. :-)

Answer 1

i liked it, until u said u were feeling a little "emo". srsly "emo" ppl are not the only ppl who write poetry let alone sad poetry. it was a good poem, just lose the lable,

Answer 2

i think most all poems are beautiful

you are speaking your mind

i think it was great =]

Answer 3

It's sad, and I makes me think of me a little when I am lonely and sad =/. Also your avatar is cute ^_^, sorry had to say it =o