How bad does this poem suck?

Question

Well I waited till you stabbed my back

Just hoping that we’d get on track

You tell me to let go

But I hold on with each blow

As the tears fall down

And I start to drown

You keep on pushing me under

Please save me from this thunder

You won’t grab my hand

You won’t help me stand

I’ll ignore the pain

The broken promises and rain

I’ll always remember that day

That day in September

How we were all broken

Unitl late December

It’s worth all that hurts me

These little notes of memories

They’re all pointless rambling

Mixed up into words

It has no directions

Yet it has no limits

It steadies me

It readies me

To face the cruelness of reality

I wrote it while crying hysterically, so it can't be all that great. It's had no editing or time put into it.

Answer 1

Oh, my dear!

For being written while you were crying, wow. I thought the beginning was a bit off, like you were trying to force things to rhyme, but by the end I felt your pain.

This honestly in my opinion is the best poem I've read on here for a while. And I think that's because of the truth behind the words.

Fantastic job.

Answer 2

A shallow letter written. Why people put up unedited work, I can never understand.

Answer 3

Very good- especially when you are crying- I could really feel the emoition.

Whatever made you write this poem, I'm sorry.

God bless

Answer 4

sometimes writing your feelings is the best composition, its a great description of what your feeling...we feel your pain...

very good job...

Answer 5

stirring...

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