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How bad is my poem??

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What do you think of my poem? Do you like it, or hate it? What do you think it is suppose to be about? What does it mean to you?

its like getting caught

doing something you know is wrong

but feels so right

as if you never knew any different

never knew any better

its the feeling you have,

when you feel you can no longer feel,

the way you do right now

when everything gets surreal

anguished and confused

but never ready to quit

guilty thoughts begin to consume

feeling as though my life will never resume

more poems on my site, untappedtalent.co.cc

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  1. i liked it alot sound like one I wrote awhiel ago called sin, it is published on poetry.com


  2. the first part is from Ludacris ...so dont copy cheater...

    the rest is fien.. the middle part is ok not fine...

    i like poems that rhyme....me likey

  3. Could use two points.

  4. I don't like poems about emotions very much. I like poems that inspire emotions because of the story they tell or the image they convey. I like particulars.sorry.  

  5. well to be honest it's not the best poem I've read, but i think it's sort of interesting..

    it sounds like it came from the middle section of a whole poem, though

    this "chopped-out-from-the-middle" feeling can be eliminated if you name the "something" or give the emotions an ending.

  6. never ever ask how bad your poem is, you will never have respect! The sad thing is you are right about the fact you get more answers though!
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