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How can I finish this story?

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Alright,I really need help finishing this compo that my teacher gave. You don't have to write for me,or if you are an expert you can,but I will change some words.It's best to write it as your answer,or just give me an idea. The starting's like this:

"Here's a letter from New Zealand,"said Father excitedly when he came home from work one evening.

"It must be from Aunt Maria," screamed my sister.

I need at least 150 more words.

Some points are:

-what you did

-what the content of the letter was

-how Aunt Maria was related to your family

-what happened in the end

Please help me! I need it by Monday!

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  1. Aunt Maria is your aunt and the best aunt you ever had. You love her so much but she is living in NZ, and you're in Japan. You can only visit her during the summer vacations and the letter is like an annual routine for Aunt Maria. She writes a letter every year, inviting you to stay with her in NZ for the summer holidays and your father always let you stay with her. You don't have a mom. She died when you were 3. But that is what your dad told you, you don't even remember your mom.

    Then, the next week after receiving the letter, comes the summer vacation. You pack your stuffs and set for NZ alone. Your dad just stay at Japan.

    So, you arrive there and like every year, hug her. You're living in a NZ country life with Aunt Maria.

    But one day, during the last day before you have to go back home, you accidentally find a wedding album. It is Aunt Maria's. You are anxious to see what Uncle John(Maria's husband) looks like because you've never even seen him in your life because Aunt Maria said that he's dead. But shockingly, the excitement turns into confusion as you see your DAD is in the picture. You ask Aunt Maria about that and she explains all about it.

    Your Dad and Aunt Maria are actually engaged. But they separated when you were 3 because your dad, (Uncle John) was a very bad father. So, there is a lot of crying and then, Aunt Maria(your mom) leaves NZ and goes back to Japan with you and your family is reunited and live happily ever after.  

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