How can I help a person write better for the TOEFL?

Question

I am having trouble with a person who has to take the TOEFL. He has got some problems in the writing section (specially organizing ideas). I have tried to guide him by making him write essays step by step, but he keeps making the same mistakes! (he writes somehow well when I am monitoring, but when he writes on his own, it is like going back to the beginning). What shall I do? We have a month until his exam date. Any ideas are welcome!!!!

Answer 1

hey this article should help. It deals with the SAT essay but it talks a lot about ways to organize ideas and get them to flow!

http://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/art...

Answer 2

Rule:

You must write "topic sentences" (given in the question) then you have to support it to make a paragraph with "secondary" or "supporting ones" (examples, your own ideas, experiences, stuff mentioned in a lecture or given writing, ect).

Of course, DO NOT FORGET grammar and vocabulary.

That is the real trick of writing an essay in  iBT TOEFL.

I got 24/30 in iBT TOEFL.

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