How can I make this Filipino Birthday Card in Tagalog? 10points best answer?

Question

My grandmother came from the Philippines and its her 70th birthday. I don't speak tagalog. She doesn't speak English, so I need help. There are no online translators either.

This is what I have so far:

Maligayang Bati Sa Iyong Kaarawan!

Mahal Ka Namin Inay at Lola! (Is this good so far?)

With loving thoughts and memories

of the wonderful mother

you've always been...

With heartfelt gratitude

for the special grandmother you are...

With warm wishes for you

to enjoy your day and remember

how very much you're loved.

Answer 1

PinayAko's version is good. Here's another version if you like.

Maligayang Bati Sa Iyong Kaarawan!

Mahal Ka Namin Inay at Lola! - it's good indeed

Kasama ng mga mahahalagang isipan at ala-ala

ng iyong pagiging isang mabuting ina

noon pa man...

Kasama ng taus-pusong pasasalamat

para sa inyo na isang espesyal lola...

Kasama ng mga mainit na kahilingan para sa inyo

na wari'y maging masaya kayo sa inyong araw at tandaan

gaano kayo taus-pusong minamahal.

Answer 2

Maligayang bati Sa Inyong Kaarawan!

Mahal Ka Namin Inay at Lola!

Aming iginugunita ang mga magagandang alaala

ng inyong pagiging isang napakabuting ina

sa amin...

Aming ipinasasalamat ng taos-puso

ang inyong pagiging isang mahalagang lola sa amin...

Kaya aming ipinadadala itong mga pagbati

upang maging maligaya ka sa inyong kaarawan

at nang maalala ninyo na kayo ay minamahal namin ng lubusan.

*Make sure that your grandmother does read Tagalog. Because if she can't read English, and if she is not from the Tagalog ethnic group, then she won't understand it. Most Filipino people can't converse in Tagalog but are more confident in English.

Answer 3

Yes that sounds good so far. I'll try to translate what you wrote in tagalog..

Ang iyong mga alaala ay napaka tamis at maganda

dahil napaka buti mong ina....lagi kang mabuti

Napakabuti at especial kong lola na nag iisa

Sana maging masaya ang iyong kaarawan. Wag mong kakalimutan na mahal na mahal ka namin lahat.