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The recreational and fitness facilities that are offered to the guests at the Centra airport hotel include gym, indoor sauna bath and spa, out door swimming facilities and many other exercise facilities.

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  1. Centra Airport Hotel features recreational and fitness amenities such

    as an exercise room, gym, sauna, spa and outdoor swimming facilities.


  2. Guests at the Centra Airport Hotel are offered recreational and fitness facilities which include an indoor gym, sauna bath, spa, also many  outdoor swimming and exercise facilities are available as well.

  3. The recreational and fitness facilities at the airport offers guests gym, indoor sauna bath and spa, outdoor swimming facilities and many more ( exercise facilities.)

  4. The key to these tasks is to go over and over it so that you know the idea exactly and then try to express it in your own words. The repetition of some words is unavoidable. Inversion and any changes to the order also serve the purpose. So, for example...

    The Centre airport hotel affords guests a variety of leisure facilities such as swimming and exercise, with the indoor features including sauna bath and spa as well as gym.

  5. The Centra Airport Hotel offer their guests recreational and fitness facilities that include; gym, exercise equipment, indoor sauna bath and spa, and an outdoor swimming pool.

  6. Rearrange the order. Current order is facilities,guests, hotel, examples. Try to only use one "facilities". You can just call it "sauna & spa".

    It would be plagiarizing if I gave you my answer.  

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