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How can I put this in a better way: "But being new to the western culture, she goes through culture shock and?

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and her naiveness prove to much for the intellectual Mr. Burns to bear with"

I don't want to end the sentence with a "with". This is just a sentence in a summary.

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  1. There's nothing wrong with ending a sentence with a preposition, although there's no need to do that in this case.  There are several other things wrong with your sentence.  Try this:

    Being new to western culture, she goes through culture shock.  Her naivete proves too much for the intellectual Mr. Burns.  


  2. Your entire sentence is awkward, and contains too many words.

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