How can i make this synopsis for The Phantom Of The Opera more brief?

Question

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Answer 1

Well I know it sounds obvious, you need to use less words.

Be concise and stick to the point.

Describe the core of the plot and what it means.

Answer 2

That's not too bad a go.

I would say:

There is a Phantom in the Opera. He falls in love with singer Christine (who believes the Phantom is an angel sent by her deceased father to teach her to sing). However, Raoul, a childhood sweetheart of Christine's appears. They both fall in love with each other again. Phantom becomes jealous and kidnaps Christine. Raoul goes to her rescue. Phantom realises their true love for each other and releases her to Raoul who escapes with Christine. The building is burning down, the Phantom is left within