How can i write this letter ?

Question

I wanna invite my friend to come to visit me in London. I have to write a letter to the immigration service in the airport.

Is this letter right ?

London, xx june 2008

This letter is to confirm that I , (name of the person + passaport number ) invite (mates name + passaport number ) TO london.

I will cover all the costs regarding everything they will need throughout their stay in london. They will reside in my house at:(my address.

Should u have any futher questions , please do no hesitate to contact me on (my number) In their arrival at ( the airport name ) I will be waiting for both oustside.

Please guys help me! thks

Answer 1

sounds good and professional.

Answer 2

Wow. This letter's looking aweeesome. However, consider adding a couple things.

-At the top, put the address on top right. Press Enter and put London Immigration Services and their address on the left. Then Press Enter twice and put To Whom it may concern. (This is how I've seen professional letters written, but I'm not sure how professional you want to make this.)

-I would also include their dates of intended arrival and departure.

Take Care.