Question:

How creepy is this poem?

by Guest59801  |  earlier

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one of the strangest things i ever wrote. I'm sorry if I scare you.

= D

here:

As i saw your arm around her my vision turned to blur.

When i cried myself to sleep that night, i woke with a plight.

I went quickly to where he stayed, in my heart the shrpest blade.He hardly noticed me ther, I was already beyond repair. i snuck up from behind, not a single sane thought in my mind.He tried to fight back, but was out with one brick wack.A hour later he awoke and only then had i spoke

but you disregarded what i said and any sanity i had left was shed. I had no control, where my heart once beat now lay a dark hole.you screamed in pain as i cut a vain "please call help" you cried "theyre coming" I lied as you took your last breath you finally began to smell deaths. your lifeless body tied, what a terrible way to have died.you said we were unigue, i shouldve known it was bleak but now you've gotten what you've deserve your new girl will be so sad, but at least now my justice is served

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  1. That's creepy :)

    I liked it.


  2. this has such great chi flowing trough it. that was very good

  3. ummm very creepy..

  4. Somebody is crazy...hmm. Could be me, but on a scale of 1-10, 10 being totally freaky, I give it a seven.  I only give it a seven because it is also kind of sad...

  5. its wonderful he must pi**ed you off but we all get what we deserve

  6. I really like it ! It sounds like song lyrics

    you should form a band, then sing it lol

    and make the music creepy, to harmonise with the words

    x

  7. it's not creepy at al...it's stupid...hwhehe just kidding

  8. that's hardcore

  9. hhmm...well i dont think it was dat creepy, vengence is vengence lol.

  10. uhhhh

    i felt darkness overcoming me

  11. That was beautiful! I loved the way it moved from heart break to a dead heart.

  12. add rhythm

    add story

    add fantasy

    add melodrama

    add philosophy

    add love and happiness

    add selflessness

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