How did I fare with my poem - I fear it is too heavy for the reader's minds

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I felt a feeling massive, hung

Built in strength from inside my lung

Travelled up from my bowels

It made me secrete these majestic vowels

Onto the white space of paper

To be lost into poems coming later

The tip of feathers caressed in ink

My thoughts are arches that I must link

Grandeur many, the vast plains of intelligent patter

Compressed into one millionth's matter

Wisely, as an I owl, Fore I retreat into my bed

I must conclude my words – I wish them to be read

Answer 1

If this was one of the poems we had to study for a practise GCSE piece, it would be one I'd look at, think "oh god it's one of those ones you have to decipher" but after a while I think I'd grow to like it, after help understading it of course.

Answer 2

I love it, but then I like really "heavy" poems as you put it, I Especially liked this one because it describes perfectly how I feel most of the time.

Answer 3

That would depend on who the reader is.