I am currently writing a story. The situation is like this: the "bad group" walks in on a group of the "nice group." The good group is part of an area that is being occupied by the "bad side," so they are helpless, and have to follow the orders that the "bad guys" give them. It's wartime, 'ya know? Like an occupation. So, a group of four "bad guys" does a routine check on the quarters of the "good guys" to make sure that they are not hiding any rebels. My main character, a girl, has caught the leader's eye (he is a womanizer). I'm just wondering how he would walk into the room when they start the routine check (remember that he hasn't seen the girl yet) and also how he would react when he sees her (how he walks, what he says). I'm having trouble deciding on what his personality should be like, and would like some advice. Thanks!
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