How do u like my poem???

Question

When your heart is broken,

When you wanna cry,

When you just keep failing

no matter how many times you try,

When you feel like breaking down,

When push comes to shove,

When you feel sad and lonely,

Turn to your true love. <3

Answer 1

its good.     can be good acoustic song

Answer 2

awww, that is soooooo sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 3

cheeseball.

Answer 4

Ah! an incurable romantic....

nice rhyme scheme.

it&#039;s a bit short though.

try for a haiku

Good luck

Answer 5

ehhhh, needs some more work

Answer 6

I honestly think it&#039;s a great poem, fantastic. keep of the good work. =)

Answer 7

Somewhat good, but needs some work.

Answer 8

wow,....i thought it was great i&#039;ve heard of something similar but not that similar i love poetry it&#039;s relaxing and calming and that was really good u should become a poet!

Answer 9

i like it except for the first line. its a love poem,  the only one that can break my heart would be my true love. why would i turn to my true love if she has broken my heart.  

Answer 10

aww

Answer 11

not bad :]

Answer 12

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!! lol i think its great! im not a lover, but its nice, good good

Answer 13

i think it is very nice, my 1 consern was that u use when a lot, just make it come from the hart not so much ryming needed

Answer 14

I think its beautiful and very sweet.

Answer 15

add more, its great.

Answer 16

awwwwwww yeahh

Answer 17

its great and very passionate