How do you apologise for any inconvenience?

Question

Principles of Thermodynamics:

. . Human, Urban, and Stellar

(--for chem tutor, a.k.a., An Honest Man)

There is a hill upon a hill; streams there meet,

And these, of sand, whose confluence of earth

Ascends by weight of falling sweat, tame the heat,

Conducted like a crab quite in reverse.

I too ascended on this rill. Here the verse

Of earth on earth grows shrill from throbbing feet

Mysteriously magnified; songs of mirth

Rise there, as bustling visions in the street.

The music dims my eyes with cooling tears;

Each in the valley frore, as flame appears,

And wells around, and as a lid, encloses

The drear echoing which softly disappears.

A vision bright as tears was torn from Moses,

And this sight, all the salt of years opposes.

Answer 1

no apologies needed for this...well written. " Music dims my eyes with cooling tears" has been committed to my memory bank.

Answer 2

"I apologize for any inconvenience."

Answer 3

I find I hear a hollow memory of an echo from a stone hall under your hill. Ancient in origin. Strange. Good work.

Answer 4

This is a very good poem.

Answer 5

This is very good.  I am not fond of "streams there meet" and would prefer the more natural "streams meet there".  Excellent work!

Keep writing!

T.