How do you feel about this message and do you think it is too ugly?

Question

you reek of rape and suicide

but i can get past that

these thoughts that i must always hide

scurry away like rats

hiding in the shadows

every time a light shines in

lurking in the crevasses

as if they wait to feast again

on innocence and childhood dreams

to leave a nightmare corpse

you stole the very heart from me

with the way that you forced my empathy

your mark is left upon my wrists

my revenge is in that i still exist

Answer 1

I like it, it's meaningful. Did you write it?

Answer 2

I like it. It has graphic, emotive words that conjure up an image of a strong child/adult personality who overcomes a sinister, disgusting entity.

I love that it finishes with the triumphant.....;

"I still exist".

Exeptional!

Answer 3

Very powerful.... but very dark.

Answer 4

Wow  Lovechild '

this is off the hook and so raw and to the bone' and i loved it all.You always write from your heart and soul and that's why i always love your poems so much...Bravo to this one.