How do you find my poem?

Question

Wind, the offer

The answer in attendent

Gust

Answer 1

short and sweet yet still creative

but i think you have the creativity to make it longer and better

Answer 2

huh? what? who?

Answer 3

Don't get it. Maybe that's my fault. However, in my opinion, a poem needs to be generally understandable before it becomes anything else. You can be as abstract as you want but you need to be discernible.

I don't know man, I think this poem needs a little more information.

I'm a fan of short poems, so please don't say it's because I'm just not into it:

"Poetry"

And man attempts

To match

The gods in eloquence

Anyway, check this one out about abstracting. See what you think of it:

http://rlexperiment.blogspot.com/2008/08...

Answer 4

weirdo

Answer 5

It's hushed and quiet like a simple, sweet windsong.

Answer 6

Although your poem makes no sense to me, and though I'm only 16 I have studied my fair share of poetry, I still have a legitimate critique: I think it should be the "answer in attendANCE". it makes more sense.

good luck?

Answer 7

I find it under Arts & Humanities / Poetry. (haha) Whooooshhhhh!

Answer 8

Your describing wind.

Not bad though,try describing it more and give your deeply emotions.Think what is like to be wind and feel it.What do you feel when the word wind is mentioned ? What can you think of ? Just spill all out.