How do you find this poem? Thoughts and feelings?

Question

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She bends metal with her mind

Calls it art

I call it a cage

He bent metal in with his heart

Called it a foundation

I called it a boost

He’s my hero

Shoved me from the cage

A life for a life

To squeeze through the bar

I left something behind

In the cage

To large to loose

So there he sits

In the cage

With my anger

I’m still not mad, just crippled

Answer 1

i'm not so sure

its kind of confusing and not very straight

when you write a poem, dont use "I" and "She" or "He" together. like dont say something about what she or he did then comment on how you think about it. it confuses the reader and doenst make a great poem