How do you like my addition to the hockey song

Question

Both by Tim Hus

One for the lockout year

1) Oh Ron Mclean save the game We already lost some cheers

Overpaid pricks with hockey sticks who make too much a year

Oh what the schmuk, drop the puck, boys do you got no shame?

Jesus Christ! Get on the ice and play the god damned game

2) Oh goodness me Fox TV where do you get your sights?

Can't you keep track, the puck is black that's why the ice is white

And that red glare you see up there, well we've seen that for years

For heaven sakes all it takes

Is a couple a dozen beers.

Answer 1

When I first read the question I was worried and a little miffed...you can't change a song that's become legend from a legendary singer.

But this is actually pretty hilarious.  It's really good and really funny.  Of course, now I'm going to have the real version stuck in my head all night....but that's okay.  You're really creative. Good job!

Answer 2

Pretty good but it's got no beat.