How do you like my poem, "Adonai, here's love by rain"?

Question

Oh Adonai, be exalted by my love coming in the heavens as rain,

With so many drops upon You, my Lord, how could it be

Said that my heart is vain.

Accordingly, the sheep raises not an umbrella so that my

Affection, my devotion, my admiration for You gets everything

In the heavens and on the earth wet,

Wherefore, only the goats scream out, "Is he done, yet!"

For the beauty of Your everlasting reign expresses my

Attraction to You symbolic to rain,

Oh Adonai, my heart belongs to You, as well as, the

Conscious thoughts in my brain.

Answer 1

For the beauty of your everlasting reign:

I can feel the existence of the Lord.

Good impressions.