How do you like my poem, "for love of Adonai"?

Question

I will say, my Adonai is "my refuge and my fortress," in

Him will I trust,

"Who am I," I say, "but a man made of dust."

However, Adonai created me

In His image, in His likeness, as my desire,

His beautiful hair like white wool, His eloquent skin like bronze

And His great eyes like blazing fire.

So come, my One True Love, Adonai, speak to me face to face

As if I were Moses,

And let the four winds of heaven blow up to You my sweet

Smelling aromas along with one million red roses.

Answer 1

Eloquently put.

...interesting

I think that I do rather like it..