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How do you like my poem so far?

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If ever two were one, then surely we would be inseparable.

You would feel my pain and I would feel yours.

Intertwined, we would move in unison.

Combined, our hearts would be united.

Synchronized, this is what we would be.

There would be no reason for arguments because I would know how to prevent them.

I would have your back and you would have mine.

We would be like Romeo and Juliet.

You would be my strength and my weakness.

Like Popeye, my spinach. Like superman, my kryptonite

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  1. pretty nice.

    kinda weird though.


  2. hmmm....

  3. It's nice. I like it.

    I suggest that you add one more line and end it with a bang.

    here is my suggestion: We would know each other intimately but never complain or embarrassed by a $haytee situation like skidmarks on white tighties

    that would totally sum it up dude.

  4. Awwwwwwwwww its so cute!!

    Well done!!

    x

  5. Good. I like that last line.

  6. its beautiful=]]

  7. Interesting!!!

  8. nice

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  9. its really good! My only suggestion would be used "entwined" instead of intertwined.  

  10. NICE!

  11. the beginning was ok but the bottom part doesn't make much sense

  12. IT"S WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please write another one

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