How do you like my poems? there are 5 poems.?

Question

"My love for you"

"My love for you is like a raging sea;

Yearning to know your love for me,

At night i cry to see your face;

To miss the kiss of lips I wish to taste,

Sometimes I ponder of what to do;

With out me in the sight of you,

You broke my heart and put it together again;

Now i wonder what it could have been,

How could you be so dismayed;

When i was the one hurt and betrayed,

For I forgive you as you can see;

So now I know your love for me."

"The eyes of angels sparkle"

"They sparkle like the stars above;

Hearts with care, loyalty, honesty and love,

Angels can be scary and mysterious;

Yet they always have there arms around us,

They sparkle like the morning sea;

Always watching over me,

Protecting people day and night;

And children staying up from fright,

They pray the Lord their soul to keep;

We all should know who to seek,

God made the earth, the stars, the sky;

I see that twinkle in your eye."

"Better People"

"Who do you think you are;

Getten in your fancy car,

The cameras, the lights and everything tight;

You want everything to turn out right,

The poperotsie and all that bling;

Can u imagine such a thing,

You get hooked on crack and other drugs;

Then you start to become a thug,

Your sell yourself to ugly faces;

When you could be in better places,

I know where i don't want to be;

You standing next to me."

"We go together"

"I love you so much;

To feel your touch,

My stomach si filled with butterflies;

I remember the look in your eyes,

I think about you everyday;

When we talk, i don't know what to say,

You fill my heart with happiness and love;

We go together like two doves,

I love you so much;

I don't know what to so,

I love you so much;

I hope you love me as much as i love you."

This is a poem i wrote on an airplaine on my way to say good-bye to my grandma, she was dying.

"I love you lots"

"I hope God doesn't have to take you now;

To the death, my head wil bow,

I love you always, from the heart;

Though we may be far apart,

We shall see each other again someday;

It will be in a good and different way,

I love you lots and always will;

My love for you, my heart will fill"

Thats it so far. i will put another one on later!

Answer 1

I liked "Better People."  It could be the chorus part of a song.  Think of a recording artist who might like it.  Clean up the spelling.  Add a few verses and send it to the fan club of the musical artist who does this type of thing.  Keep writing, and be sure to keep a journal of all your work.  You can join a group of writers online or elsewhere.

Answer 2

wow, your really good, I like how you piece all your words together to create imagery with emotion. Their all solid

Answer 3

i think they are awesome how you tell about the real world and love, but if you are going to give that to a dude it might give him mixed signals

Answer 4

Good For Five At A Time.

They Somewhat Seem Related.