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Question

Poem :)

As times change, people do too

Your far from the friend that I once knew.

Its a real shame, but time must move on

The clock is ticking til the end of the song.

The point of life is to live til the last day

I wish I did then, when we were still friends

But now, we go our separate ways.

I called you my best friend for various reasons

One you were kind and uncapable of treason

Sadly, I know now that was a lie.

Like Bennedict Arnold, YOU were a spy

So how'd it feel friend?

To know that its over.

The luck is gone on our four leaf clover.

The story's been written,and the song sung,

Too many lies, this friendship is done.

thanks :)

Answer 1

Wow! I'm am so sorry to hear that you two have broken up,you were like two peas in a pot,attached at the hips,I'm so sorry... I want you to be my forever,I'll be there for you whenever. I never want to say Good-bye,I'll always love you til the day I die.

Answer 2

very nice and poignant,  so true in many ways.

Answer 3

your poem is simply great. it's like you've written about me and my ex best friend. sad:( you really have talent (:

Answer 4

ok

Answer 5

cool!!! = )

Answer 6

i love the four leaf clover line

Answer 7

i like it

Answer 8

good job! (:

Answer 9

Wow that's great!!!

Answer 10

It's sad because you have lost someone you thought of as a friend and it shows in your words that it still hurts.

Answer 11

really good it speaks to me....