How do you like my quot / poem?

Question

girls are like apples on trees

the boys have to pic them the good

apples are at the top of the tree

the bad apples are at the bottom

but most of the boys are afraid to pic the good apples

so they stay at the bottom and pic the bad apples so the

good apples think their is something wrong with them when

really they are amazing

they just have to wait for the right guy who is brave enough to climb to the top of the tree

i made this up it might be a lil cheesy sorry lol rate it 1-10 thanks

Answer 1

Fun - tos - tic - and where is the Adam's apple - u might be the Adams apple lol - nice - i like the way you have expressed yourself - good and bad -girls (apples) What u said is true - Im brave man - lol

Answer 2

lol sounds good id rate it a 7 with a good idea and very true in a lot of cases although i know 1 or 2 who went for good apples

Answer 3

i like it i would rate it a 6/10 you have to make it flow a little better. but its a funny and true poem love it.

Answer 4

its good

buut i read this before in a lot of places

just worded differently