How do you like this version of the "Roses are red" poem?

Question

"Roses are red..."

Some veins are red,

The others are probably blue.

Should I cut her or him instead?

Should he or she cut me or you?

When I'm happy,

I've accomplished something hard to do.

Maybe I've been working my hardest lately,

Who cares about some F'n pair of shoes?

So, that bull...shh... might be neat...

It's idiotic to want to walk with my feet.

This breed of f***s I plant in the concrete,

Hence, the growth of critique.

Answer 1

plethera of emo!!!

Answer 2

Whatcha been smokin?

Answer 3

it's just like your f***s you planted

Answer 4

what a poet that didnt no it

Answer 5

yeah ummmm, wasn't the best but you know what they say.

You win some, you pick your bum.

Answer 6

nope don't like it,   Boooooo,  hiss.  

Answer 7

pretty good..