Im writing a story and I've gotten to a part where one of my characters get hit, but I can't seem to find a suitable sound to match the occasion. Here's what im talking about.
Character A walks away, and Character B slaps Character A across the face, Character A makes a surprised sound.
Thats the part im stuck on, I can't seem to find an appropriate sound to place after that part (I plan to put the sound in quotes on the next line). Ahh, or Agh doesn't work. Anyone got any suggestions?
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