How do you rate my poem, Excellent-Poor?

Question

Oh Adonai, with Love, You have given me this day,

In it I kneel before You to pray.

In submission, I say, "Adonai, You are all that is Power and Glory,"

"Bring Us together in Our Psalms 91 story."

In the timeless love of my heart, Your words set me apart,

Away from the male goat's kingdom of dark.

In doing so, my Lord, You have given me Blessings beyond the

Winds of heaven,

For I see Your eyes roaming the earth, they're seven.

Title: "Above All There Is Adonai."

Would you rate it, as:

Excellent

Very good

Good

Not so good

Poor

Thank you.

Answer 1

very good

Answer 2

That's a good poem.I like how it rhymes