How do you rate my poem?

Question

Oh Adonai, with Love, You have given me this day,

In it I kneel before You to pray.

In submission I say, "Adonai, You are all that is Power

And Glory,

Bring Us together In Our Psalms 91 story."

In the timeless love of my heart, Your words set me apart,

Away from the male goat's kingdom of dark.

In doing so, my Lord, You have given me Blessings

Beyond the winds of heaven,

For I see Your eyes roaming the earth, they're seven.

Title: "Above All There Is Adonai."

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Thank you.

Answer 1

You're okay. But you have got to use stronger words no offense but you're good and you are off to a fine start, just a few classes you'll be EXCELLENT!