How do you think about my poem?

Question

Another Poem

By:Pepsi Man

Here's another poem to you

and its also true

and i hope you understand

this is nothin grand

but a silly poem for the girl of my dreams

and thats just the theme

you must feel like one of a kind

to have someone care so much

even when you're so blind

to see that your touch

takes away all my pain

in every sense

and i promise to not take you in vain

and i mean everything nonetheless

i will love you always

Until the day of my death

to my very last breath

and i hope to remember that phrase

and if you want go here and can see other poems i wrote

http://www.poemofquotes.com/members/search?qt=PepsiMan

Answer 1

Cute! Lucky her.

Answer 2

its really sweet shes  very lucky