How do you think of this poem?

Question

"Night"

The icy wind blew hard,

Like a storm at its strongest power,

It sped quickly through the night,

All of the lights grew dark,

Just like the night sky,

Leaving me in the shivering cold,

Of the cruel, cruel night,

The rain poured through the sky,

And lightning split through the night,

The night was so dark,

It seems that I was lost,

Lost in an endless maze,

Of night

Answer 1

is good in my opinion but I'm not really into poetry

Answer 2

hmm both me and bf kinda half asleep but it sounds k ^^

Answer 3

i think its quite good, if you wrote or are writing it you could try changing:

Like a storm at its strongest power

                     to

Like a storm at its strongest might

                     or

with the storms overpowering strength

Answer 4

I like the concept..and it shows promise.  But I think it should be considered a first draft and tidied up a bit.  

You are on the right track.

Have someone else read it out loud to you and listen careful to the tempo and the play of the words.

Like I said...it shows promise, but it needs polishing.