How do you wrap your mind around 2 different thoughts? (Variations on a theme)

Question

Amber hair wisps across shoulders

Green eyes bright with amorous joy

Rain falls, she's soaked dripping wet

Footsteps light, toes splashing puddles

..........Blond ringlets encircle

..........Blue eyes engage my own

..........Cool breeze cools her body

..........Legs thin like little girls

She wears my ring on her finger...........She's all I am and more

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Lines 5-8 should be across lines 1-4 but Yahoo would not accommodate the girth of my words.

Answer 1

Sensual, loving, perception images excellent!

No ryhme intended, nor pursued...that means you have command of the poetic placements of words and punctuations. You know your readers well!!

Answer 2

An excellent trigee without the structure since Yahoo would not allow. Sensual, serving two women at once!  A naughty meeting this threesome becomes!  You got my thumbs up!

Edit:  You should name this:  A Trigee Threesome?

Answer 3

"Hi!",

You have expressed your self well in this Trigee With full colour. Very creative.

WELL DONE!

Cheers : )

Answer 4

Great Trigee!  I actually interpreted 2 lovers meeting in the rain.

no matter, still lovely!

Answer 5

Your answer to my Q this morning got the juices flowing, hey?

I enjoyed this a lot!

*As far as I know there are no rhyme rules.

That's why I like these so much. I suck at rhyming.

Answer 6

You held my attention from the beginning. Whether a rainbow or kaleidoscope, the fusion of colors run together beautifully. Wish I could have seen the rest.