How do you wrap your mind around 2 different thoughts?

Question

Stormy trigee

Thunder rumbles in the distance....Rabbits run circles 'round trees

Dark clouds grow and boil.............Birds fly into windows

Leaves turn up, welcoming rain......Squirrels chatter nervously

Lightning strikes, branches fall......Cats and dogs run for cover

Crazy nature...............................Cra... critters

Answer 1

Like it, like it very much.....your next book (AFTER you've finished your bunnies book, of course) will be called Me and My Trigees.

I will buy it.

Answer 2

Gee I try..............You done did it

Don't know why....You made a hit!

Birds can fly........You are soaring!

Piece of pie.........Your verse scoring!

It's crazy..............As I see it.

Answer 3

This is a very clever trigee.  You are very good with this form of poetry.  Well done.  I enjoyed the thunder and critters.

Answer 4

Your poem is very good.  I liked

the word-play.

Answer 5

"Hi!",

'WOW GIRL!'. Your showing off now hay? : )

You have done really well at these.

I love how you have the weather on the left and the fauna on the right bring into the 3rd environment.

WELL DONE!

Cheers : )

Answer 6

This sounds like the dark morning we had here also.

Great Trigee,

Answer 7

If TD is the Trigee god, then you are most definitely the Trigee Goddess. All hail the Goddess Reenie! I'm thinking a marble temple for you on Mars...we can put statues of you and TD there, Elaine can be worshipped for the classical forms, we'll head to Dondi's temple to pray for rhythm and music for our poems. Oh yes...now I must call my sculptor friend.

Answer 8

What Eva said!  This is terrific!

Answer 9

You are on a roll with these trigees.  Each is very good and more importantly, they flow well when combined.  My compliments on your thunder!

Answer 10

I like it, regardless of yahoo's little tricks.

Answer 11

Another solid Trigee. You have captured the spirit of the form. Well done.

Answer 12

OK... I have to say this... like I wrap my arms around two different women... verrrrrrrry carefully... and that's good like what you wrote.

Answer 13

You are knocking these Trigee's out of the ballpark! This one is very fitting to read under the dark sky above me right now.

Answer 14

Well, seek help from this site. I found it to be amazing and interesting:

http://www.mindcafe.org/

Best of luck!

Answer 15

Reenie...this is a 'duo-gee', and it's one h**l of a poem! You are excellently good with images, and understated! majesty/turmoil of a storm! It's the 'understatement' that caught my attention...and the exact way animals react!

Madam, you are GOOD!!!