How does my deck rate? (this is for tradional Formate, and going to be used in offical championships?

Question

im just going to list my cards.

Monsters- 22

Right Arm of the Forbidden One

Left Arm of the Forbidden One

Right Leg of the Forbidden One

Left Leg of the Forbidden One

Exodia The Forbidden One

Gemini Elf

Archfiend Soldier

Marshmallon

Copycat

Blue-Eyes White Dragon

Neo-Spacian Grand Mole

Dark Magician

Alien Shocktrooper X2

Deep Diver

Cyber Jar

Magician of Faith

Winged Kuriboh

Blast Sphere

Destiny Hero - Deffender

Sabersaurus

Neo-Spacian Air Humming Bird

Magic - 15

Magical Mallet

Dark Factory of Mass Production

Scapegoat

Mystical Space Typhoon

Monster Reborn

Swords of Revealing Light

Lighting Vortex

Monster Reincarnation

Shield Crush

Graceful Charity

Reload

Heavy Storm

Pot of Greed

Painful Choice

Burden of the Mighty

Traps - 9

Hallowed Life Barrier

Magic Cylinder

Dimenisonal Prison\

Cloning

Sakuretsu Armor

Negate Attack

Backup Solider X2

Gravity Bind

i know i have alot of forbidden cards , but like i said its tradional format

Answer 1

i give it 6/10 you need to stuck with one or two themes for a deck.

if i were you i would build my deck using destiny heroes and neo spacians.