How does my hatchet report sound?

Question

Ok How does this report sound. It's on the book Hatchet by Gary Paulsen. Oh and by the way in the report we had to answer 2 questions :What do you think would have happened if Brian had found the survival pack much ealrier? and. WOuld he be the same person he became under the books circumstances?

How did I do? And does it sound like a 7th grade report?

Answer 1

heyyy~ i think it sounds good =)